Rate my Pok�mon Platinum team please :)?

not bad, torterra seems fine, but on starapter i personally wouldnt use return or uturn but quick attack which comes in handy in many cases and possible defog if not drill peck or some other flying move. on luxray all the moves rock exceptswords dance, i much rather have a dark move like crunch, gallade is awesome and vapearon too, i would also change a move to have magical leaf instead to fight ground/water pokemon like whiscash, but those moves you picked cause you have some working strategy i hope so i would rate and 8.5.